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The mists around the mountains clear to reveal in their center a ring of stones, an easy landmark for travelers to gather.

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Post Tue May 31, 2005 12:00 am

by the way, any critisizing you could give would be most welcome. i welcome insults. it's the best way to improve, trying to write circles around your nay-sayers. BUT I AM SERIOUSLY PUMPED THAT I HAVE AT LEAST 3 FANS. y'all think ya might be able to get in some more? opinons people, i need discussion! :lol: really, i can't give you what you want unless you TALK about what you want. :D
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Post Tue May 31, 2005 12:05 am

and again--THANKS Y'ALL :D :D :D :lol: :lol: :lol: :D :D :D
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Post Tue May 31, 2005 12:16 am

oh, and i called gragonflame flame because she seems to be a real fire cracker. she almost talks as much as i do! :lol:
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Post Tue May 31, 2005 3:26 pm

waiting... :|
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Post Tue May 31, 2005 4:50 pm

Hey I love this stuff...... I'm glad you can write it cause I cant. And so far I have nothing to critize about....... but I do like how you give the pronunciations for the words... :D keep it up.
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Post Tue May 31, 2005 4:50 pm

Hey! ;) Na, just kidding!

-anyways, that was kool!! what does "water mist" mean anyways??? You really are a great* writer!!! (by the way, call me whatever...) :) And, honestly, I don't think anyone could critizize your writing even if they wanted too!! :???: Whats to critizize? :? :stunned: :) :D :P .....I'm looking forward to the next story!!! :D



(you'd better write another or I'll go CraZZzY!!! :out: :out: :stress: :P :out: ;)


:angel: :oops: :?: :| d :lol: :lol: :lol:

uh, ...........that was .......?.................w i e r d ? !
Last edited by dragonflame on Tue May 31, 2005 4:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
don't give up the world for someone who doesn't even like you, cuz you just might mean the world to someone else!
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