The End Battle

Great! Okay, tell me when you're done with this and i'll start it.

K- go for it *gives the thumbs up*

Wow. Fast reader. Okay, I'll try and start tomorrow.

hey see if y'all like this or not.

You should really look into what other people said about this...

Don't really know where to look. Either you can tell me or just say that you think it sucks for yourself. I thought it was kinda choppy, and I had trouble getting a real feel of the kind of creatures my charecters were. They seemed to come across as almost human even though they only have to eat about twice a week, don't have ex on a regular basis, don't eat the plants themselves but only what they give, come on all colors other than black, and live in a community that's really more like an extended family when it comes to how they are towards each other. If I can't get that across then I didn't do a very good job at writing it, but I was trying not to make it too long. I also admit that I can't spell my way out of a paper bag.

Did I forget anything?

I know that neither of our story's are perfect but heck... I dont know about you but I'm not going for perfect. *shruggs*