Sun Dec 25, 2005 4:36 pm by Songhue
Don't really know where to look. Either you can tell me or just say that you think it sucks for yourself. I thought it was kinda choppy, and I had trouble getting a real feel of the kind of creatures my charecters were. They seemed to come across as almost human even though they only have to eat about twice a week, don't have ex on a regular basis, don't eat the plants themselves but only what they give, come on all colors other than black, and live in a community that's really more like an extended family when it comes to how they are towards each other. If I can't get that across then I didn't do a very good job at writing it, but I was trying not to make it too long. I also admit that I can't spell my way out of a paper bag.
Did I forget anything?