Some critique, perhaps? :)

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Songhue
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Re: Some critique, perhaps? :)

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*points* What they said. *settles in to wait for more. :)
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http://www.geocities.com/sythevir/piece4.htm

angst angst angst...and vague imagery - I need to go write something happy now...

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Re: Some critique, perhaps? :)

Post by Vineda »

woo-hoo!

aye, not the happiest

but mmm-mmmm good stuff :lol:
thank you!
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