For non-Serian roleplaying (Persona RP and Fanfiction) The mists around the mountains clear to reveal in their center a ring of stones, an easy landmark for travelers to gather.
I was wanting it to come as close as possible but it's hard to put everything in when you're trying to keep it to a short six page thing instead of the twenty that's in your head.......*shrugs* Eh, I gave it a shot at least.
Well It's harder when your writing it as you go along (at least for me anyways) cause then if you go back and re-write a part or fix something nobody's really gonna see it.
yeppers, thats why I like having it written in advance, all nice and purrdy, then I can just put it up. Like the first couple pages of moonlight swim I had already written so I could just put some up while I was writeing the next part, but you read to dang fast... *shakes head*