Some critique, perhaps? :)

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Posting Elemental
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Post Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:00 am

Re: Some critique, perhaps? :)

*points* What they said. *settles in to wait for more. :)
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Post Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:52 pm

Re: Some critique, perhaps? :)

angst angst angst...and vague imagery - I need to go write something happy now...
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Post Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:36 pm

Re: Some critique, perhaps? :)


aye, not the happiest

but mmm-mmmm good stuff :lol:
thank you!
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