For non-Serian roleplaying (Persona RP and Fanfiction) The mists around the mountains clear to reveal in their center a ring of stones, an easy landmark for travelers to gather.
Don't really know where to look. Either you can tell me or just say that you think it sucks for yourself. I thought it was kinda choppy, and I had trouble getting a real feel of the kind of creatures my charecters were. They seemed to come across as almost human even though they only have to eat about twice a week, don't have ex on a regular basis, don't eat the plants themselves but only what they give, come on all colors other than black, and live in a community that's really more like an extended family when it comes to how they are towards each other. If I can't get that across then I didn't do a very good job at writing it, but I was trying not to make it too long. I also admit that I can't spell my way out of a paper bag.